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Post by bubbles2 on Feb 13, 2012 6:27:56 GMT -6
Jacob Ritchie Full Name:Jacob Ritchie StudentHouse:White RibbonAge:16 Ethnicity:White Gender:Male Sexuality:Straight Physical Description:Tall,Skinny and somewhat cute,he has a six pack.Jacob weres baggy tops and joggy bottoms,he has long,thin arms,small lips and wide eyes. Personality:Brave,Ambitious,Cool,Party Animal,Athletic History:Younger Sibling is Bethany.He vaulted but stopped for his Rugby session.He bought a horse called Casper,a white horse.Bethany asked him if he could bring Puzzles along,her dog and he decided to 'Come for a sort of visit' but ended up appling after he had liked it so much and was amazed by Blue Ridge Academy,definitely when he heard from his sister about the P.E classes.Jacob originally comes from Scotland. |
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Post by Ω-Admin-Cara-Ω on Feb 13, 2012 12:19:58 GMT -6
Hi Bubbles
The picture is way too big and you need to expand the app by heaps. I want at least two paragraphs for the history and one (would rather two) for Physical Descp and personality. If you can't do that much on your ps3, then borrow a computer.
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Post by bubbles2 on Feb 13, 2012 14:11:08 GMT -6
I could expand it more,even on the ps3.I can't borrow one because my laptop is broken and it's the only one in the house  |
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Post by bubbles2 on Feb 13, 2012 14:54:41 GMT -6
that better?
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Post by Ω-Admin-Cara-Ω on Feb 13, 2012 15:12:10 GMT -6
Accepted.||<3 You know the drill. You will be residing in Room D24 of the White Ribbon House, your room mate is: Eurico Hanson
Thank you so much for expanding it for me. As with Bethany though, you need to add a bit more on the personalty once you get your laptop up and running again. |
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